Essay Writing
An opening should make the experience clear enough for a reader to follow. Compare these fictional examples and choose an approach that fits your own material.
Choose the moment or idea the essay will develop before polishing its opening. If you have not found that center yet, write a rough middle paragraph first and return to the beginning.
An opening gives the reader a place to begin. It can establish a situation, a question or a detail that the rest of the essay develops. It does not need to do everything in one sentence.
Compare the five approaches below. Use the comments to revise your own material; do not copy the fictional experiences.
Drop the reader into a specific moment. No setup, no context, just action.
Example:
"The flour exploded across the kitchen counter, and I knew my grandmother's recipe had just become mine to figure out."
This works because it creates immediate curiosity. What happened? Why does the recipe matter? The reader has to keep going to find out.
Say something unexpected or counterintuitive that makes the reader pause.
Example:
"The first time I failed, it was spectacular."
Bold openings work when they're genuine. Don't be controversial for its own sake, the statement should connect to something real about your experience.
Lead with something specific and unexpected that reveals character.
Example:
"I own seventeen identical black notebooks, and I've filled every one."
Specific numbers and details signal that this essay will be concrete and vivid, not generic and forgettable.
A line of dialogue drops the reader into a scene immediately.
Example:
"'You're not actually going to wear that, are you?' My mother's question would follow me across two continents."
Dialogue creates immediacy and voice. It also hints at relationships and tension that the essay will explore.
Set up a tension between two things, expectations vs. reality, past vs. present, two parts of your identity.
Example:
"On paper, I was the perfect student. In reality, I hadn't opened a textbook in six months."
Contrasts create tension, and tension keeps readers engaged.
The Ivy Essay Blueprint includes fictional teaching essays, commentary and writing exercises, plus templates for structuring your entire essay.
Get the Blueprint, $37"I have always been passionate about..."
Vague, overused, and tells rather than shows. Everyone claims passion, show it instead.
"Webster's Dictionary defines success as..."
Dictionary definitions are a cliché. Admissions officers have seen thousands of these.
"From a young age, I knew I wanted to..."
Chronological openings are boring. Start with something happening now, then flashback if needed.
Repeating the prompt
"A time I faced a challenge was when..." wastes precious words. Get into your story immediately.
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