Transfer Essays Are Different
Generic essay advice doesn't work for transfer students. Here's what makes your essay unique—and challenging.
What NOT to Do
- Badmouth your current school
- Focus only on what's wrong now
- Give vague reasons ("better fit")
- Ignore your college experience
- Sound like a freshman applicant
What Works
- Show growth from college experience
- Specific reasons for THIS school
- Clear academic/career evolution
- Demonstrate maturity
- Address the "why transfer" directly
We Help With Every Transfer Situation
Community College → 4-Year
Show how your CC experience prepared you and why you're ready for this next step.
Academic Upgrade
Frame your desire for more rigor without sounding elitist or ungrateful.
Major Change
Explain how your interests evolved and why only this school offers what you need.
Cultural Fit
Address fit issues diplomatically while showing genuine enthusiasm for the new school.
Gap Year Transfer
Turn your non-traditional path into a compelling narrative of growth.
Dream School Retry
Apply again with a stronger, more mature application that shows growth.
What You Get
Expert Review
Detailed feedback on your transfer essay with specific improvement suggestions
Review + Rewrite
Full feedback plus a professionally rewritten version + 1 revision round
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Everything above + 3 revision rounds + priority support + money-back guarantee
Transfer Essay FAQ
Do you understand transfer admissions specifically?
Yes. Transfer admissions is different from freshman admissions, and we tailor our feedback accordingly. We know that transfer essays must address "why transfer" while showing maturity and growth.
Can you help with Common App transfer essays AND school-specific supplements?
Absolutely. We review all transfer essay types including the Common App transfer essay, Coalition transfer essay, and individual school supplements.
I'm transferring from community college. Is that okay?
Of course! CC-to-4-year transfers are common and we have extensive experience helping students frame their community college experience positively.
How fast can I get feedback?
Standard delivery is 3-5 days. If you have an urgent deadline, contact us—we may be able to accommodate rush requests.